Rough cut 2 with feedback

Sam skinner 

·         There’s a bit of shaky camera at the end 

·         Maybe use a couple of different sound effects for the punches so they don’t all sound exactly the same

·         Phone disappears as it’s dropped

·         1:33 it looks like it buffers slightly where the cut is completely smooth  

·         The music fits really well

·         The colour (weather stays consistent all the way through which looks good)

The teacher's improvements

·         Add in titles

·         Add back in the lovely low angle long shot of Ben

·         Change the shot at the end – it’s too wobbly

·         Look at the steadiness of the shot in the phone call. 

·         Good non diegetic sound

·         Engaging to watch

·         It looks like an action opening!

Tom and Nathan